I only read the beginning and I have to wait til tomorrow to read to the end, but let me just say that THIS IS MY FAVORITE KIND OF LUHAN in humorous fic, this is so perfect, and I will savor all of the snark on the bus *muah muah kiss* to the genius and the Luhan.
okay, finally I finished it at the airport and still A++! poor Sehun;; poor Luhan;; poor everybody, actually, but at least they got over their frustrations and guilt and bonded and stuff.
um...moaning...over macaroni...that is intense, Sehun, ahaha. selu sure went on an emotional roller coaster that day, but I guess it's understandable considering how awful and stressed out they felt.
this is super cute, and frustrated Luhan just makes me gleeful, okay. thank you for this W:ewflnrfgw much <3
Help this was really cute. I was so mad at Lu Han in the beginning because jeez Sehun has a goddamn migraine but Lu Han had a pretty terrible day too so it ended up evening out a little. I love Minseok's reaction to what Lu Han did and Lu Han's awkward apology. It's all very cute. I just. Yes. Sehun. So cute when he's flustered. Yes. I'm a little incoherent sorry about that. It's a very lovely fic though!
I already wept all over this fic last week so I don't know what else to add except THIS WAS THE MOST DELICIOUS STORY! Not because they met in a coffee shop and later ended up at a swanky French restaurant, but because I loved the the wit and the snark and the frustration of the irritable leads. this was just so entertaining and at the same time so relatable and i love it and i love you!
lksjdflakjs so freakin' cute so adorable~ glad things seem to be progressing to something more? heeheehee glad things got cleared up and hopefully good things in their future~
btw, i got confused at one part because jongdae got mentioned twice and i'm not sure if he works for luhan's office and the coffee shop or like...yeah... "Rain is falling, hitting the glass of the coffee shop windows. Normally Sehun would be admiring the sound, but everything is like a nail to his migraine; Jongdae is roasting coffee right now and the smell of the beans, normally something he can barely tolerate—whiffs of sweet darkness drifting up from the coffee grinder—is magnified tenfold. He slumps dramatically over the counter when none of the customers are looking and groans."
I'M SO GLAD YOU WERE THE ONE TO PICK MY PROMPT BLESS YOU AND THIS STORY
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I'm so sorry this comment is so late, but I was so horribly busy these past weeks. There were just so many things I loved about this and I really hope I'll remember all of them. I really didn't expect this when I saw this prompt had been claimed. Everything in this fic was just so balanced. And I know this doesn't sound like a raving compliment, but it's intended as one. I loved the focus on the different friendships, as well as on Sehun and Luhan's interactions. The mix between the angstier parts, the wonderful flashes of humor inbetween, as well as the amazing chemistry between Selu. They actually were ridiculously cute sometimes, but not in a fluffy way (I'm probably not making any sense, but just let me assure you that I loved it. I love fluff, but this was glorious as well.) Sehun was so out of his comfort zone and Luhan was pressuring himself with his need to make it up to the younger man and they were constantly on edge around each other, but at the same time the attraction was so strong, it was practically flying at me from my screen and... /sighs happily
it's like he's standing on the edge of a precipice but there's no danger of falling except up This line. It doesn't get more flawless than this. Istg, it actually gave me the best kind of goose bumps, it's that amazing! It was such an perfect ending for such an expressive and thoughtful story.
I loved this to bits and I know I'll be rereading this more than just once in the future!
i'm all brained out so this won't be a long comment, but i really loved reading this ansa and i kept meaning to let you know i've read it twice already huhu;; ♥
Whaa this was so cute! I really like your writing style and how you left the ending a bit open. You really nailed the dialogue and i just loved Luhan and Sehun in this one. Super cute fic. Thank you!
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um...moaning...over macaroni...that is intense, Sehun, ahaha. selu sure went on an emotional roller coaster that day, but I guess it's understandable considering how awful and stressed out they felt.
this is super cute, and frustrated Luhan just makes me gleeful, okay. thank you for this W:ewflnrfgw much <3
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so adorable~
glad things seem to be progressing to something more? heeheehee glad things got cleared up and hopefully good things in their future~
btw, i got confused at one part because jongdae got mentioned twice and i'm not sure if he works for luhan's office and the coffee shop or like...yeah...
"Rain is falling, hitting the glass of the coffee shop windows. Normally Sehun would be admiring the sound, but everything is like a nail to his migraine; Jongdae is roasting coffee right now and the smell of the beans, normally something he can barely tolerate—whiffs of sweet darkness drifting up from the coffee grinder—is magnified tenfold. He slumps dramatically over the counter when none of the customers are looking and groans."
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not the best first meeting but i'm glad they sorted everything out uwu
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BLESS YOU AND THIS STORY
/takes a deep breath and tries to leave you a bit more coherent feedback
I'm so sorry this comment is so late, but I was so horribly busy these past weeks. There were just so many things I loved about this and I really hope I'll remember all of them.
I really didn't expect this when I saw this prompt had been claimed. Everything in this fic was just so balanced. And I know this doesn't sound like a raving compliment, but it's intended as one. I loved the focus on the different friendships, as well as on Sehun and Luhan's interactions. The mix between the angstier parts, the wonderful flashes of humor inbetween, as well as the amazing chemistry between Selu. They actually were ridiculously cute sometimes, but not in a fluffy way (I'm probably not making any sense, but just let me assure you that I loved it. I love fluff, but this was glorious as well.)
Sehun was so out of his comfort zone and Luhan was pressuring himself with his need to make it up to the younger man and they were constantly on edge around each other, but at the same time the attraction was so strong, it was practically flying at me from my screen and... /sighs happily
it's like he's standing on the edge of a precipice but there's no danger of falling except up
This line.
It doesn't get more flawless than this.
Istg, it actually gave me the best kind of goose bumps, it's that amazing! It was such an perfect ending for such an expressive and thoughtful story.
I loved this to bits and I know I'll be rereading this more than just once in the future!
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